Angel of Death

Hey there Ky! I said I was going give a critique, well possibly several since you have about three of these posted, but here I am! The heat blistered the ...

Ello Connie! Well, I kinda have to agree with Jared. This is a bit rushed, though it was written beautifully and your characters are well-developed and altogether this was entertaining ...

23. Taking the Road (music edition) So, I decided to screw everything that I believed in. When I write, I write for fun and not necessarily just to finish something. ...

22. The Wallflower So, I decided that I need to find pictures for this book. Emily Colin Hartwell Rosamond Owen

Attention! I might be writing another part to this using the same character. It's just to work on character development and such, since I can't seem to write anything. So ...

21. Taking the Road So I've decided to pursue the Road to Eden I'm going to start outlining things about characters and such and plot when I get to my ...

Hey there Connie! So, I quite liked this, no wait, I loved it! It was a really, brilliant idea and I liked all of the twist and turns there was ...

Hey there Samuel! Well, when I was in Middle School, American History was one of my favorite classes even though the history books weren't really exciting to read about. This ...

20. Perfection Road to Eden Addison Meadow is a seventeen year old girl who lives in a society where everything is organized, perfect. No one is ever angry or frustrated, ...

He is still sexy and I think it's nice he's broadening his choice of characters. I mean he can't still be the teenage vampire some of us love forever. Plus, ...

Thanks Krupp! Hopefully, it will get better though.

Hey Ash! Ooh I'm so excited to read this! After the guests of Everlancor finished their meals, the Baron insisted that the male delegation join him for a smoke in ...

Hey KJ!! I agree with the above reviewer, this was really good and you're developing Autumn really well. I like the fact that Thor seems all mysterious in the beginning ...

Wow, thanks! I was just getting worried that this was never going to get reviewed. I was really hoping that Terry's character was okay in this chapter because the more ...

19. Secrets are Unfaithful, if not Beautiful So, as of now the word count for Elysium is zero but I keep coming up with quotes and things of that matter. ...